Hi Josh, I had a listen, which YouTuber is the song about? Seemed very focused on one person, so as a listener it was hard to relate – most love songs are a bit broader and more generic in the lyrics so that more of the audience can relate. Though I get this might be an ode to a particular person. I think the vocals could also be stronger – if you want to get some support by taking online lessons do search for an online singing teacher and I am sure they would help you out. Did you write/record the backing music or was that a default backing track?